Draft Two
This draft was made in response to the audience feedback from the first draft. I much prefer this draft to my first one because, it is a more conventional music magazine, but also, generally the magazine looks more professional since it has been tweaked since last night.
Audience feedback
"I'm liking it. Could actually be a proper magazine."
"Not bad, the main image needs changing. Don't like it."
"It's just like a 'perfected version' of your first one."
"Much better than last time. Masthead is looking good!"
"Cool, house colours work well."
"It needs something... Doesn't quite look professional yet."
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